that familiar feeling

when you're torn in between love and lust

you seem so unmoved..
are you hiding something?

so much in peace..
should i read your face?

well if i do, the risk i'd have to take would be too high,
no wonder i've been strugglin to tell you goodbye.

one long shot at your face
there you blew my case.

make me reach out to feelings
i could never erase.

and everyone thinks we have it going on
when we don't.

she dumped you, he ditched me..
you're more or less on the same boat as me.

what is it that we have?
another one to tear me into half?

i did not intend to fall into this ditch
if not for the feeling of acceptance that comes with this s**t.

is it that we really do have it but can't say it?
or is it me again fantasizing every bit? :/

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

last questions are difficult to answer I guess if you two could sit and discuss
I am sure answer will easily obtained:)
These familiar feeling that we contain is nothing but our own circumstances ..
If you care about others...how do they feel then you are no where:(
If the both person have the power to make decisions of their own then they can survive ..nicely written piece..keep writing!!

[The Dreamer]

wow , all those painful memories came flooding in a rush - a good one :)

[jwenjwen]

thank you :D
holdin back what you feel hurts more when they act like nothins happenin.

[The Dreamer]

true !

[CreativeStroke]

Strong emotions pour into this piece, leaving questions for the reader to face. You did well with this write and your pain emanates from each word you penned. Well done with this fascinating work.

[jwenjwen]

:) thank you very much.