Lost

Harrishma rhyme

Lost

November 12, 2011

Fear the guardian angel left your side

Remember still you need her most-

Raucous depravity, want from lies

Sentimental creature- time’s fabled ghost

Lining the hem of perpetual apprise

Gracious farewell of love’s gilded host

Author's Note

Harrisham Rhyme is created by a female poet
named Harrisham Minhas, who is from the State of
Punjab in India.

Harrishma rhyme is a six-line rhyming stanza. In
this form, the last alphabet (letter) of the first
word of each line is the first alphabet (letter) of
the first word of next line. There is no restriction
on the starting alphabet (letter) of the first line.
Rhyme scheme : ababab.

Reviews

[J Todd Underhill]

I love this poem, short sweet and to the point! I might have to give this for a try!

[Priscilla Sayers]

Beautiful. Powerful. Concise.

[J.V. Stanley]

Ok, mistakes fixed, hopefully it doesn't suck

[Chris]

Uh...not to pop the bubble but line five???

[Larry Dyson]

i think i get it but why is the word nefarius the first line word instead of a word beginning with "s"?..im confused.

[Larry Dyson]

very well done.