Traveling Waters

 

Traveling Waters

 

 

Unraveling thoughts run like water,

Melting the tundra of eclipsed truths;

Spiraling deeper, they go

Leaving honesty in perplexity.

Spewing upward from the vortex

Shards of moments in time;

A compass drifts upon

The dinghy of uncharted dreams.

Fish them out, reel them in

Waterlogged

Within the mind and body.

Saturate them with tears

Quench the spirit of the waterfall

That thirsts for sincerity.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Fluidity is what you were going for in this work...that is abundant in the start and finish of this write...just had the feel from the first few words:

Unraveling thoughts run like water,

[Moflo]

"Quench the spirit of the waterfall/That thirsts for sincerity" Such an amazing line to end with, I love it! Great job.

[Erotic Goddess]

Leaving honesty in perplexity.

Spewing upward from the vortex

Shards of moments in time;

This is beautiful, I love the way you put words together in your writing. This speaks volumes of the thoughts inside of us. I really liked this.

~Stephanie