time and time again

loove is always on my mind

THRU IT ALL THE SUNSHINE AND THE RAIN THE HEARTACHE AND PAIN YET I STILL LOVE YOU TIME AND TIME AGAIN IS IT ALL REAL? OR WAS IT JUST A THRILL? THESE THINGS I WONDER HOLDING IT ALL IN ME NO ONE TO  TALK TO TO LET IT ALL FREE CAUSING MORE PRESSURE TO THE STRESS IM UNDER. MY OWN ACTION CAUGHT ME BY SURPRISE I BELIEVED YOUR EVERY WORD ARE THEY TRUE? OR ARE THEY LIES? I WANT TO TELL YOU HOW I REALLY FEEL RATHER THAN JUST BEING YOUR SEX APPEAL. I THINK ABOUT YOU DAY AND NIGHT I SEE YOU AS MY SHINING LIGHT THAT SHINES BRIGHT SO BRIGHT THAT IM BLINDED INTO LOVE  OFTEN WONDER WERE YOU  SEND FROM UP ABOVE? THE MAN I ALWAYS PRAYED FOR IS THAT YOU?  I FIND IT HARD TO BELIEVE BECAUSE ITS TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE! THRU IT ALL THE SUNSHINE AND THE RAIN THE HEARTACE AND PAIN ILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU TIME AND TIME AGAIN!

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[NinjaPi]

Nice poem. It sounds like the character wants a deeper connection with her lover.
I suggest you split up your lines rather than haveing one big paragraph.