make it like it was

make it like it was  love me like you once did.....

i still love you eventho i try to keep these feelings hid try to convince myself to let 

you  go cause it didnt last but the love  i have for you will never pass at night i cry

listening to sad songs trying to figure our what went wrong you were my everything

i plave my life in your hands i thought  you were heaven sent the man ive always

wanted im being haunted by all the memories we once shared the more it haunts me

the less i can bare because i still care the feeling wont die just wont disappear i cant

fight it  and  i wont because......... i just want you to make it like it was!

Author's Note

i freestyle write dont care or worry about commas periods etc just let it all flow

Reviews

[hershey's kiss]

I like the freestyle. it's a tad bit confusing at first, but for me at least it's pretty easy to pick out where sentences are supposed to start and end.
the style you chose for this is very well suited to what you're writing about. it helps to express your confusion and all the sad thoughts flying all over the place to where it almost doesn't make any sense.
long-story-short, I like it. :]

- hershey's kiss