What I wanted to know

What I wanted to know

A Poem by justright
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reality

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Expanding into a shroud of foggy dusty clear dreams.  Her dreams ran like a movie right next to my head all night, but mine were so much more real to me.  I felt her body next to mine, and for some time I forgot where my body ended and hers began.  I pinched her to see if I could feel it.  She winced.  I pushed into her, and as she enveloped me I felt her pulse surround me.


She woke up from her dream and became a highlight of mine. 


When I woke up I know I needed to do something important.  I felt the pressure to perform, like there was something that had to be done that day.  I tried to rack my mind for a clue, what is it I need to accomplish.  This is important.  I felt the pressure mount.  What is it I must do.  This will make a big difference, it will make things better.  Its like a button that must be pushed, or a puzzle solved.  Why was it alluding me, it was right there.  Pressure building…  I farted.  Wow.  That does feel better.  Thanks for that.  

© 2014 justright


Author's Note

justright
Note, this is just the start of my writing. I like it - is that because it reminds me a relaxing time in my life. Does this bring anyone else a sense of peace?

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Hey great that you're starting out. (And also the naming is pretty chill. I like) something we want to know. I'd say my thoughts are more racing than peaceful now. Ha but really. Great job

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 17, 2014
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justright
justright

valrico, FL



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I like to write, and I feel like I have something in me that wants to express itself. I feel somehow connected with the fabric of everything when I write. It just feels right. Hence the name, "just.. more..

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