Your Virtuous Woman

Come to me, my man of God
I need you as you're praying
Lay your head upon my heart
Heed the words I am saying

I'll always remain humble
I'll love you with all I am
I'll offer my submission
I'll exist as your rare gem

My lips are faithful counsel
My role for God's sacrifice
I'll abide when you're guiding
I'll offer and claim advice

Promise you'll cherish my heart
Vow to remain my strong man
Keep me close within your prayer
Stand strong in God's mighty plan

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

This to me was a powerful piece about the loyalty and sanctity of a union bound by that of God, such as marriage in the classic sense. I loved the feeling of the imagery that was woven into your poem. I would even go as far as saying something like this could make really good vows.

Great Ink!
Wolfie

[TTBoy28]

Justjenn_2u -- this reads like a wonderful wedding vow. I do hope you find or have found that wonderful being that you are seeking! Congrats here!

[Randolf Ramos]

In his hands lies a great peace and harmony. im glad you already found the true meaning of life.

[ByJ.T.Rogers]

I like what Wolfie said, It makes a great vow. It is pure and loving. I like what is promised and what is asked in return. However the first few line I was confuse who is speaking and who is being told this. At first I thought it was God speaking when you started with "Come to me, my man of God". Other then that I thought is was lovely. All people should be that devoted to their spouses.
90/100
**J.T.**