My Words

These words flowed like my hands weren't even writing. An emotional write for me.

My words ache for your hands to touch

 

all of the solitary moments I wished

for you to only know

every hint of my deep sorrow

     stuck in my throat

and cold

with hungry satisfying teeth

 

Tell me, can you hear

my soul that cries

into my porcelain flesh and creates

my stained soul and bones that ache

 

Please arouse me, I feel fear

 

Will you ever sustain me

as we swim through broad oceans

Heal all of the monstrous thoughts I remember

    all the wounds and lost hope

    all the begging and inner needs

Life has been so dark, I wonder

Were my eyes

ever open

 

All the times I felt

I was standing and soon

I would fall

 

Author's Note

LYRICAL

Reviews

[THERISA]

Every poet leaves a piece of their soul behind when they share a poem that they have written. Your emotions shine out like a beacon to the readers in the choppy seas of life. Capturing the essence of the situation and the accompanying emotions. Thank you for sharing this very emotional poem with us.

Therisa

[Rain]

You must allow yourself to freewrite more often. Although I felt much oain and sadness it was easy to read and seemed so sincere. Great piece. Rain..

[Murphy]

A powerful release... and if you held those tears back, where would they go, what would they do? My own personal reading experience was as follows... as I read this, I heard the sound of chains breaking and a tempestuous rush. Great job letting it out. Keep up the good work.

[Amor-de-angel]

It reads well, you let your feelings out in a great write. I believe the best writes are just written and not planned.
I could clearly feel the sadness in it.
Well done

[Noah]

i loved the flow of this poem and the pain it carried, well delivered and a great write (hang on let me think of something else educated and typical- ok i think thats it) loved it as always ;P

[Jason]

I felt the flow and the emotion, that came through very strong. I felt aroused, yet scared...very deep.

[An owl on the moon]

Such depth and heartbreak; such a powerful piece! Had the feeling for me of a psalm, a sorrowful cry for help, for one other to know the deep suffering you alone bear on your soul. Amazing what you can do with words...