Never Vindicated

He asks her if she is feeling rambunctious.

 

She is thinking peaceful thoughts until he stirs her shamed mind.

 

She stares into the aqua sky contemplating the other betrayals he may find.

 

He feels so insecure that he could once again lose her to the lost ones.

 

He wonders if there will be a repeated night where she didn't come home to her sons.

 

She is fighting the demons clinging within.

 

He remembers the times of her living in her branded sin.

 

She is hearing the taunting voices scream.

 

She wishes her mistakes were just a horrid dream.

 

She prays that the urge will be lifted.

 

Into her barrier, she has slowly drifted.

 

 

Reviews

[Shadows of Sight]

We all have inner demons that, whisper into our ears, and make some paths more appealing then others at times. Be these demons of outside experience or inside turmoil. But like all things, we are yin and yang, each demon has and angel beside it, fighting for you and what is good. It becomes a choice, that one fills with will power. Sometimes that will power needs chocolate or a helping hand of a friend to become strong enought to conquer those demons.
Good poem.. A little picture into your soul. :)
May the winds of life, always give strength to your angels, as you walk along.

[Kari]

good

[Kitty]

Sometimes when we make mistakes, those that claim they love us, are the ones that let us forget our mistakes, but they still want you in their lives... thats when the relationship is toxic and you must get out to truly move on and be a new person.. I've been there.

..get out of my brain :)

Write on,
Melba

[Ralphy]

A most wonderful depiction of her mind in doubt of her past, present and somewhat future that moves me forward. Your correlation of words allows me to see deep into her thoughts, giving me a sense of her Vindicated life. Nice write Jenn

[Barbara Walker]

I like the rhyming scheme in this and the imagery is very good! A very good read! Thanks for sharing. Barbara

[A.r. Bazian]

broken rhyme fits will with the overall scheme of the poem!
i like it!
strange technique for sure!
but skillful!

keep it up!

[THE BLACK SEAL]

this one is in my opinion your best that i have read. i really liked the form of it and the almost rambling thoughts of it

[MistyJRose]

i really like this short and to the point, and i like what it poses from both sides of the human mind both male and female alike. the never asked, never answers questions, the shame that the thoughts have occurred. We've all had that happen, and this really brings it out, great job. Thanks for the read request.

[Drea]

You need not worry about vindication. It is as revenge. It eats the soul away from the inside; pulling energy at an expense far more dear that it is worth. It may not seem that way at first; but it eats like a slow poison and spreads, cancerous dark sludge into the surrounding cells.
The more difficult choice; but better in the end is forgiveness. I don't mean forgetting; then you loose the lessons. Forgive.Forgive the self; forgive the parts of us that make us imperfect. NO one is in the eyes of humanity; in the eyes of society. But we all have divinity inside. The creator akasha force made you with light inside. Forgive the cracks and imperfections; you were made that way; we all have them. Focus on the light and the divinity you have within you to shine through those cracks. If you were perfect there wouldn't be anyplace for that light to shine out.

[Joseph - Michael]

That's true and sad at the same time. I don't have any addictions or any other problems, except looking into the mirrior, that's when the s**t really hit the fan

Anyway, I really admire how you wrote it so soft and smooth without any breakouts, so it's all good...

[Kelsie :]]

i really like this poem. you discribed everything wih very stong words. im excited to read more of your work!
GREAT WRITE!!! :)