Mental Block

Sometimes I have so many things in my head that I want to say but I can't find the words. This short poem explains that!

Fingers clench the artist's tool

 

Mind re-energizing its fuel

 

Tears fall as thoughts prevail

 

Words stuck in mind's jail

 

Beautiful red drips on paper

Reviews

[Red_Queen]

i Just felt like coming back and reviewing this again cause i have a massive case of the "writer's block" right now.

still very good.

[Red_Queen]

a great piece i loved it. The more i read of your writing the more i like it.

[kree8ivity]

It will flow better if you take out "is" on the second line, the verb re-energizing is present-tense so to say it is happening is somewhat redundant. "It's" on the second line is a possessive pronoun, not a contraction so take the apostrophe out. "my" on the second to last line isn't needed, but it doesn't bother the flow too much. otherwise, a poem i can access and understand and relate with.

take no offense to my criticism... and if you do, just keep in mind that this is exactly how i approach my own work.

[Kitty]

This is great.. Im starting to think I am you..lol
I certainly understand writers block.. it happens for weeks on end.. it sucks..
but you should read my "Writers block' I think you would understand the mental picture I tried to convey in that poem..

Thanks for sharing ;)
Melba

[akarusty]

I know how this feels. Quite a lot. I like how the text is written in red. Simple, short and bitterly sweet. Welcome to writerscafe.org.