Cycle

At times I don’t understand

Bothering with moodiness 

Constantly surrendering 

Does it make you feel better

Even when you see my tears 

F**k it, tell me you love me

Reviews

[m.s.early]

Infatuation or desperation compensating for dejection. If there is a sobering moment to be avoided, will delusion/denial prolong it?

The street grungy slang knocked us off of the empathetic stool we found ourselves perched on in the first lines. Interesting strategy.

[Pax Analog]

This has a blunt extended haiku feel to it. And indeed, watching our loved ones or would-be loved ones cycle thru distracted moods when we're right there for direct sharing of love can be exasperating. We're always surrendering to some variation on the inner weather -- best just give it up to the perpetual sun behind the clouds. Good reminder.

[Healing Star]

I love you ......... and the Universe loves you.

The rainbow is inside your Heart, let it Shine!

[Timothy]

Harsh! Surprisingly I feel empathetic. P.S. I need a cigarette with my coffee or I won't drink it

[Wondering Mind]

even the Moon has its cycle