Indulge

When is it time to give up the “habit”

What is the reason

Why hang up one’s only thread of comfort

I’m not in season

Because I know my true comfort level

I wear no disguise

If my words are s**t then find a shovel

Don’t buy into lies

Before you ask yourself just who you are

Perhaps take a pause

Accept it, if you can live with your scar

Addiction, a cause

Therefore, why not comfort your truthful soul

Do you know your fate

I am the dancer who left the greed pole

Approval, too late

I will live by pen and my addiction

A simple pen bought

To convey inherited condition

So much wisdom my spirit has been taught

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

love the line - Why hang up one’s only thread of comfort
Like we have been programmed to conform to anothers ideals. Some habits are the last vestige of our own uniqueness in a world where everyone wants it but are too scared to be different. Really good piece.

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy,..]

Delightful poem, I felt struggle in your words

[The Nude Writer]

Wonderful way of saying things :) Awesome message :)

[larryb]

Pretty heavy but a very good write jenn :)

[Healing Star]

Thank you for writing this, there are many addictions.
We can be addicted to the illusion, I think most people are.
It is easier to just stay attached to the illusion, it is a safe place where you feel okay.
But to be brave enough to say illusion I am aware of you, that is truly being brave.
To say addiction I am aware of you, I want you to know I know about you.
That is the first step, and it is a huge step.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Echoes from the deapths. let those who have ears hear the truth.