happy

green grass

 

little babys

 

anw familys

 

no work

 

happy attitudes

 

respect

 

home

 

good food

 

grandmas choclate cake

 

um um um um um

Reviews

[Pj]

How brilliant! So original and striking!

[J]

Yeah! Now I'm happy, too!

Thanks!

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This is sweet! I loved the short and to the point meaning. What is better than chocolate cake and spending time with your family! Plus the fact that you don't have to work! This is my inspiration for the coming weekend! Great poem!

[None]

I had a dream one time almost just like this...everything shut down and people could spend time with their family--no work. Everything was the same as your poem...except I didn't get any of grandma's chocolate cake! I think I'll be dreaming of that tonight! hehe.
I really like your style here and this is wonderful!!

[Angel Bird]

Yes weekends and family gatherings are great.

You've done well! Good!

[the_real_me]

short and to the point!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Its really quite nice..
Cute indeed :)

[Kara Emily Krantz]

hahaha it's so sweet and cute. just fix the typos!!! sheesh it's so short you could do that :P babys = babies, chocolate, anw=and

:) but it made me smile. so thank you :)

[justink :):)]

i like i i think it is good