I agree with 'bones' down there. This is wonderful as is but if you ever wanted it to be longer, just take exactly what you have already and repeat it.
This is sooo true.
Tests suck.
College tests suck.
I have read several of your pieces and you grasp your point with such beautiful simplicity.
Some people are wordy and extensive and say the same thing that you say except in...
way too many stanzas.
i think if you used repetition and repeated certain words in this you could show how studying is like a big loop and sometimes you dont seem to be getting anywhere... maybe choose a few important words and repeat them in different places throughout the poem.
well some people think that love heals but we all know that it just makes it harder to say goodbye so i dont see the pouint in it what do you think leave a coment on my page and i will get back to you.. more..