tests

tests

A Poem by justink :):)

not easy

hard

memorize

think

search

notes

internet

study all night

tired

not thinking

 

© 2008 justink :):)


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I agree with 'bones' down there. This is wonderful as is but if you ever wanted it to be longer, just take exactly what you have already and repeat it.

This is sooo true.
Tests suck.

College tests suck.

I have read several of your pieces and you grasp your point with such beautiful simplicity.
Some people are wordy and extensive and say the same thing that you say except in...
way too many stanzas.

You do it beautiful as is.

Wonderful writer, you are.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This was so simple, it almost evaded ya, huh? Great job, Justin!

Posted 16 Years Ago


i think if you used repetition and repeated certain words in this you could show how studying is like a big loop and sometimes you dont seem to be getting anywhere... maybe choose a few important words and repeat them in different places throughout the poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Tough times!

A good example to show that with a few words one can tell a whole story.
Well done!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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