today

went ot school

had fun

ate lunch

went to comp class

had math test

passed math

went to bio

went to library

Reviews

[SweetPeachesAlways]

In order words...
You're one of the masses,
taking your a*s to classes,
doing what you should do
instead of what you could do
like living large in the world
or taking charge of some girl
just being a regular cat
none of this, none of that...
just living for this day
and living it your way...

Yeah, I get that...good job.

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This is interesting! I like that its short and to the point. Unique writing!

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

hey, y ou are a story teller. tell us more about your day! in y our poems, just my advice, you need to make the reader really engaged by giving us details!! why did you hjave fun? what did you eat for lunch? etc etc. come on.....don't hold us in suspense!

[None]

No wonder you're tired! haha This is one of those poems that will go down in history!! Good write.

[RADHICA]

INTERESTIN!!!! THAT SOUNDS LIK A VERY FUN DAY!!! LOLXX

[Tessa Le Rouge]

a day in the life of Justin Time.

nice.

[Christel Grady]

Stimulating