green
A Poem by justink :):)
green
trees
green beans
books
the start button
grass
leaves
and you with envy
© 2008 justink :):)
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Made me smile =)
Posted 16 Years Ago
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Nice, very nice!
Posted 16 Years Ago
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You have your own special style and this is great! I'm "green with envy!" haha I know you aren't materialistic or you would have mentioned money for sure! Enjoy your vacation.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Oh, you're good! DO IT AGAIN!
Terrific write. I love it!
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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thats nice but it's short & your naming things that are green try making the items go together
Posted 16 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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i really like the "and you with envy" part
good job.
keep it up kid!
Posted 16 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Nice, sutle and off guard is how you roll that conclusion in.....Very smooth..
Posted 16 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on February 20, 2008
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justink :):)new yisork, NY
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well some people think that love heals but we all know that it just makes it harder to say goodbye so i dont see the pouint in it what do you think leave a coment on my page and i will get back to you.. more..
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