Whisper

Written January 29, 2007 as part of a set of 4 poems: Cinder, Freefall, Infinity, and Whisper.

In the night I hear a voice calling me
It is you that I hear
And I am drawn to you
Unlike I have ever been before
and it calls me even more
you tell me that you love me
and I have never felt it more
than I did right then.
And to the end of time
I will whisper in your ear
"I love you"

Reviews

[Vyctm]

An interesting poem. The rhymes during the poem ruined the flow of it and lowered its value. The rest of the poem was mediocre. You have talent inside of you. Let it out for all of the world to see.