Freefall

Written January 29, 2007 as part of a set of 4 poems: Cinder, Freefall, Infinity, and Whisper.

Falling fast there is no ground below
the wind rushing past me as I fall
the air speaks to me as I know
the breath is gone from me
but alas this is not real
but a dream that I have seen
over and over again it seems
will you catch me when I fall

Reviews

[Vyctm]

I like how you took the dream everyone has had and turned it into a fairly attractive poem. The only thing I did not like was how the rhyme died after the first couple of lines. The rhythm was well played.