Mourning Star

Take on Ch. from Paradise Lost w/ my own added distress. Interpretations please

I can not compare woes, for being mortal, with them whose wallows, resound the walls of chaos; Forever forlorn, eternize despair, atop a fervid flame. Adamantine chains are a shared restrictor, the constrictor, subdued alike, that try us past exertion. Though in effort persistence finds, yet not for he, to conquer the opposition. You the foe I can obtain; preconceived His divination, but those who fell have none to hear, nil to cry, beside themselves. They ARE beside their selves.

Author's Note

Rough draft, opinions please

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

I would like to read this book. How many know that Lucifer is called the Morning star? If I am interpreting correctly you describing the third of hosts. They cannot become mortals, gain no flesh, therefore feel no human pains. This would give any being great anguish, perhaps part catalyst for tormenting us; those with flesh that have followed Jesus Christ? Excellent and thought provoking write.

[JLXXXVIII]

Spot on. Hence the title, "MOURNING Star"......yes, the book is a favorite of mine. Give it a read; I'm certain you will enjoy it

[Brittany Zedalis]

I could quote my favorite line, but then I would just be copying/pasting the entire thing. Great write!

[JLXXXVIII]

Ahhhh! Hahaha. I'm flattered and having a good laugh at that. Thank you so much

[Brittany Zedalis]

You're welcome :]

[Sami Khalil]

"resound the walls of chaos; Forever forlorn,"

A wonderful write...Thank you for sharing...:)....................

[JLXXXVIII]

So glad that you have enjoyed it!

[Sami Khalil]

I did...You are welcome...:).............