I Fell Alone

i fell alone, a lonely fall, with not a soul to tell at all,

to tell a tale of age old strife, when despair it took my life,

and for a friend in the end, was where it ends, begins again,

i hit the ground without a sound, without a sound as i went down,

and in every fibre of every bone, when i fell, i fell alone....

Reviews

[FateDictates]

love the lyrical way you write..

[Jared Michael Smith]

Fantastique! I loved the rhyme scheme, and the message was so sorrowful... Very good work. :)

[justin bluebuds]

thanks!! glad ya liked it!

[Jared Michael Smith]

You're very welcome. :)

[Sarah Lynn]

Very simple but very deep poem. I like !

[A. Garcia Sagarra]

I love the way you describe sudden loneliness, and it's beautifully written.

[justin bluebuds]

thanks very much!