passion......

when you got it you got it.....

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heated passion

nothing but passion

running through my being

i am a human being

having a passionate experience

my brain reacts to this passion

my heart beats for this passion

and because of this passion

my heart beats...

it pours from my veins

like open veins pour crimson

in the deep of the night

and in heated dreams

all i feel is you

running across my mind

my back and neck

down my thighs

back up to my lips

to exit out from my finger tips

the way you flee my soul

to openness,

i am left with no other choice

than to stop what i am doing...

even if i am sleeping,

find paper and pen

while warming up the hard drive..

it would drive me insane

to know that i lost you

eternally lost and dumbfounded..

my way would be blind;

a total blackout of the mind

a shutdown of my system with closed eyes

no breathe without you

a collapse of the lungs

and a heavy fall to the ground

i've gone stiff;my body is dumb and stupefied

my pores reek of alphabet and stanza...

still, somehow my eyes would cry ink

there is still life in me exhaling poetry and stories;

they need to exit and this is my detour

this is my breathe

the very beat to my heart

this is my life

my water

my bread

my right to write........

..................this,

..................is my passion.......

Author's Note

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Reviews

[-!katie!-]

i really love this.
very strong piece!
well done! (:

[Carrie Montgomery]

so full of...PASSION. LOl. Another great write from you. Such a clever and talented soul!
"like open veins pour crimson

in the deep of the night

and in heated dreams

all i feel is you

running across my mind

my back and neck

down my thighs

back up to my lips

to exit out from my finger tips"...wowwee!

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Well, wow...passion fills this page...overflows and runs down the sides of my monitor, crying out to be heard, to be felt, to be touched, to be admired...very nice write! Excellent job!