tear and verse.....

tear and verse.....

A Poem by Prose-full

another day

another sad cry

 

many tears shed

not a shoulder to cry on

 

another night

another lonely cry

 

many songs to cry

no ears to listen

 

many teary songs sung, but..really,

there's no need to critique my tears or my verses

 

this is my song;i willl sing it

this is my cry;i will cry it

 

your leaving will take a piece of me

but i will not let you take my song

tear or verse..

 

my tears give my song serenity

and you surely cannot take that

 

my eyes may bleed rain

but my heart will not bleed to empty

 

this is my song to cry;

i will cry it;tear and verse

but my life will not end...

 

...........it just won't.........

© 2008 Prose-full


Author's Note

Prose-full
i just found this today..from 2005...and i did some adjustments..i think i've done some developing since '05...*smiles*

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it's a really incredible job darling.
"your leaving will take a piece of me
but i will not let you take my song
tear or verse.."
good job!
i love that part.
it just really spoke to me for some reason.
i love your form of writing.
i miss reading your stuff all the time love!
monica. =]



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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hey my creative brothers and sisters of the pen...it's been a long time and a lot has changed. I don't write as often, I've been busy with college essays...I still love the creative pen, though. I am.. more..

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