candles burn.....

candles burn.....

A Poem by Prose-full

as the candles burned

so did our love

if i would've known

that was the last candle

i would've bought two

 

i never thought it would die out

my flame for you was eternal

i wanted to always shine for you;

with you

 

i want my fire back

you were my match

and i thought

we

were the perfect match

 

as the candles have burned

i still wish for a miracle

something to bring back the fire

has your wick gone dry

is it only shorter

let me attach it to mine

 

it will be worth your while...

...my love

still burns for you....

© 2008 Prose-full


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"as the candles have burned

i still wish for a miracle

something to bring back the fire"----love the metaphor. I really like this poem. Great work!


Posted 16 Years Ago


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Prose-full

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A Poem by Prose-full