A thought

Simple

she has one little thought.

she wants to be cremated.

(Yes, I know. What a silly thought.)

she is a free spirit,

she wants to be alive,

she thinks that life is more like a paradise.

for her

her life is in construction

and

her death is like an obstruction.

but why cremated?

why not buried and neglected?

(Yes, I know. You don't get it, too.)

is her life.

is her death.

is the girl with crazy mind,

is the girl who cries sometime,

is the girl who never sleeps,

is it me or is just her?

Author's Note

First one for me. I'd like to know what you think.

Reviews

[Wølfy]

Not sure if this is suppose to be a story or a poem. Looks like a poem to me. It is a bit hard, at least for me, to understand what this is suppose to be about. However, that is just me being honest. Still not the worse thing I have ever seen. For your first poem it is not that bad. Keep practicing. :)

[Andreea]

Thank you so much for your honest opinion. Is an abstract poem, so I think that every person will understand what she/he really feels when first reading this poem. I will do my best in the future, thanks again.

[Wølfy]

Ah. Yeah, I am not great at understanding abstract poems.