Warrior Ghost Dance

I write Indian poems a lot

Warrior Ghost Dance

 

Moonlight shining through the dried crispy leaves.

Dancing and swaying in the late fall breeze.

Dew locked in time on the hard frozen ground.

While in the sky Warrior Ghosts' dance around.

 

Pale and white they dance among the stars in their

ceremonial regalia in the darkness.

 

As the moon glows in t he sky.

Lacy clouds float by.

 

Their shadows dance across across the moon, twinkling

in the night across the lake.

They rise above the trees up high.

Illuminating everything in the night,

and making it so bright.

As we watch the grandfather's ghostly moon shadows

dance in the night sky.

We remember we are blessed from on high.

Copyright Susan Elaine Graves

Reviews

[Kyla H]

This poem has a nice flow to it, and it's very descriptive. Well done.

[Carter Meyer]

this was both lovely and beautiful. I throughly enjoyed reading this - and I hope you keep up the great work. I especially liked "as we watch the grandfather's ghostly moon shadows dance in the night sky". Lovely imagery right there. Overall, a very solid piece. Like I said before, keep up the great work!

Always,
Carter

[Rayne Stanton]

Beautiful, flowing, and creative. :) Nice work!