Lovely

The wrath of a lonely girl and the world.

She is beautiful,
and full of life.

Colorful and vibrant,
sharp as a knife.

Loneliness swims not peaceful as carp.
The world comes well-prepared.
Life is no longer innocent,
and melodic as a harp.

It is trying and it is distasteful-
rude to the soul.
Rarely pleasant and always taking its toll.

She is beautiful and full of life,
yet she is drowning in societal strife.

She is the girl that no one sees.

She is just as lovely as can be.

She will never be lonely with me.

Reviews

[Kaitlyn Raiford]

Your poem Lovely is absolutely lovely. I feel that you adore and admire this person deeply and that you want others to see this person the way that you do: perfect and baeutiful. I too know what it is like to see someone so special and so perfectly amazing and find others wallowing in their own ignorance to how great that person is. Anyways, I loved it. It was absolutely beautiful and flowed in ease.

[Sujash I. Purna]

Amazing! Great eloquence in each line and the pattern of rhyming...very talented!

A girl who can't get into a world full of people cos she is shy...a girl who fears she is lonely for evermore...yet she is not lonely when she is with you...and so if I'm not very much mistaken the girl is you...