Fusion

Fusion

A Poem by justAlanna
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A fun play on 'crossing the line.'

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Lips to lips-

fusion.

 

Lips to neck,

less than confusion.

 

We know where this goes from here.

 

Skin to skin-

wandering hands.

Temperature warmer than sunlit sands.

 

Touch to touch,

we move closer-

enter forbidden roads,

no more need for clothes.

 

We know where we are headed.

 

Crossed the line-

we have.

lips to lips.

skin to skin.

touch to touch.

© 2012 justAlanna


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It's realllly sensual, but still a little classy...I like it.
It's good as it is, but I think it would be even better if there was more to it. B.c the poem talks about 'forbidden roads' and crossing the line as if the lovers were not supposed to be lovers...it's just my imagination I guess lol but a longer poem detailing what leads up to this would be cool.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It's realllly sensual, but still a little classy...I like it.
It's good as it is, but I think it would be even better if there was more to it. B.c the poem talks about 'forbidden roads' and crossing the line as if the lovers were not supposed to be lovers...it's just my imagination I guess lol but a longer poem detailing what leads up to this would be cool.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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justAlanna
justAlanna

Huntington, IN



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