Nature of Love

Nature of Love

I see your eyes, in a green field
of wild flowers
Sun light reflecting off dew drops
are the depth of your soul
I come to you gently.. all that I am
 aware of your delicacy and
you posses me rare one..
I walk carefully to you..
whom my heart has spoken of
in the winter of my life
I caress you..like the running of fingers
over  swaying grains of wheat
you sway under my hand..warm breezes
of our hearts
This love is you..and I walk this dream
with morning to open my eyes
But it has not come..
So many whys that live in my head
with each one..I draw closer and
a seed falls I reach out and a petal grows
a stalk of beauty stands before me
Filling up the world  you have created in me
My breath leaves me and in its
place  you have grown even more
Where I am drowning
with your love
 Dreaming  among the wild flowers ..the subtle
fields of the heart
 I  wander in awe of you
waking ever closer to you

Reviews

[Eve]

woah, brother this is an amazing write, it is so sensual and romantic, the images are amazing! You continously amaze me with each one you write. som many beautiful line in this one, paired with visions of earthly beauty, truely beautiful, I wish I wrote it , ya punk! :) love you!

[Melody P-]

beautifully written* romantic indeed;)

"I come to you gently.. all that I am"
an offer at it's best