Imperfectly perfect girl

Yes, she exists.

 

A girl with honor and principles.

 

She has loved,

 

has a broken heart but when you meet her,

 

you can see hope in her eyes.

 

When she loves,

 

she loves wholeheartedly.

 

She has her secrets,

 

has met demons,

 

but when you meet her,

 

you'll get an unbroken smile.

 

She is lonely, afraid on the inside,

 

but when you meet her,

 

you will admire her for her courage.

 

She has been lied, got betrayed,

 

and has seen nothing but adversity,

 

but when she talks,

 

she talks about positivity.

 

She is beautiful,

 

she has hidden scars,

 

and when you meet her,

 

you will like her because of her generosity.

 

Yes, she exist,

 

the imperfectly perfect girl.

Reviews

[Papaya]

Someone who can rise above these trials and remain optimistic, brave and still be beautiful and kind deserves the reward that will surely come. 🌷

[V.R.S.C.]

Juse,

I love the confidence in this piece. I want to meet her! It is easy to find people who have faced the world and are intriguingly broken, but it is rare and wonderful to find the ones who simple face their challenges and fight for optimism.

[Juse]

yes po, thank you very much :')

[jacob erin-cilberto]

She's been through the worst and can still smile...one of two reasons....the smile is painted on, not real.
Or, she is such a positive person, nothing can bring her down....and despite the imperfections, she is one to love.
j.

[willweb]

I really liked this a lot. It feels soft and it definitely invites the reader in to stay for a while. The girl in the poem does sound amazing. Thank you for sharing this.

[Juse]

That really made my day, sir. It warms my heart... thank you so much:')