Perfect Life

We walk past like nothing has happened,

Yet my world is tumbling,

Falling to the deepest pits of despair

I smile

I laugh

I hide the turmoil that is overflowing inside

Nothing goes right,

Forever looking,

Never finding.

Putting up that mask,

Constantly gluing it back together

Never to show the true self

Never to show who I really am

Nothing has happened

I always smile

I always laugh

Nothing is wrong

My life is perfect

Reviews

[DontBlink]

You've succinctly portrayed the human character behind the mask.

[Sapphire Naylor]

Thank you :)

[Author Unknown]

Yes dont we all got it made . The only thing that really bothers me is that Isaw aflock of geese .They seem to be flying in the wrong direction . What's wrong with the world ???
Hey very nice write ...

[Sue Hart]

Robotic conditioning. Pretending all is well, smiling, laughing, and dying inside.

[Scott Metro]

In a sense your life is perfect..you described a great part of the human condition..universal truth..so in that sense it is perfect...it is shared by all that have an open and loving heart.

Enjoyed this.
Scott

[Kai Rollins]

I still say Foreign girl is a great line 0-0

[Linda alexander]

Well written, well conveyed message too, even if you simply laugh it increases end-orphans and helps you, so we all are smarter, I will say that mask we wear is to show the world I am an amazing identity, respect me, fools

[Sapphire Naylor]

haha thanks for that :)

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, take care, take care

[Brittany Zedalis]

I've put up this front before many times in life. This is well done.

[Sapphire Naylor]

Thank you :) You review is much appreciated