Surgical Romance

Surgical Romance

A Book by Junnifer Ngo


© 2013 Junnifer Ngo


Author's Note

Junnifer Ngo
I'm not finished with this and please tell me if I should turn this into a book. Also give me good feedback :)

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I think this has real potential for a romance novel. You can tell that there will definitely be conflict between Vivian and Dr. Lawrence. You can practically feel the tension between the two of them.
I'd like to read a little bit more about how they became surgeons so young, especially in Vivian's case.
I hope you decide to continue it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is pretty solid, I like it so far. There are a few grammatical errors but nothing you wouldn't miss proofreading. I thought there was a little too much description in the start stating the female's beauty, only because you should keep the reader wondering why she is so pretty, and maybe they will find out why later in the story? Just food for thought. But overall good, keep on writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on March 19, 2013
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Junnifer Ngo
Junnifer Ngo

Escondido, CA



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I'm somewhat young and like to write as a hobby so please try to put up with my writing. I thank you for any feed back you give me. :) more..

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