f**k this.

Normally I don't do this but i am so F*****G tired off all the bullshit I have to deal with.

Why do people have to f*****g torment every day? Why cant they leave me alone. 

I want to have a great girlfriend, want to have a good family life, want to actually do good in school, and want to not have to deal with stupid f*****g bullshit. 

Do I get the luxury of any of that? abso-f*****g-lutly not. 

I get bullied

and tormented

laughed at

yelled at

pushed around

I basically at the verge of being done with everything

I can't do this anymore

I want to transfer. I have been asking my mother for years, 

I want to escape.

I just want to live a happy life. 

None of this will ever happen. 

I am forever the one who they will torment. 

 

Reviews

[Bluefire]

I'm so sorry you have to go through this, it's not right for any human being to be treated in such a way. I too get bullied by even my own family. It sucks. So, there's one thing I want to say, please don't give up. If you do that one thing, then atleast you have a chance at having the happy family you wanted.

[junkiegirl17]

I do as well.

[Bluefire]

Just hold on, okay? It will get better and you will be proud that you got through this and found your family. :3

[junkiegirl17]

thank you.

[Bluefire]

No problem ^^

[Damien Davison]

It's good to get that s**t out... Stay strong and keep true to yourself. I know it's hard, trust me I do, but things will get better if you give it time and when it's right make the steps to break free... Thanks for sharing.

[Gypsy]

I know you feel like you are the only one out there but honestly so many people have it worse. Read the book a child called it and then you might be able to learn that you are lucky!

[Ees]

"Why do people have to f*****g torment every day?"- Torment me?
"I basically at the verge of being done with everything" - forgot "am"

Well, this is very much a rant, perhaps with the run on lines at the beginning more of a rant than a poem. That's okay, sometimes it feels good to throw this s**t out there.

I think that this would be more effective as a poem if you slow down, break it down. Describe the type of s**t that is getting to you. Describe what being done with everything would entail. Add some imagery. Really make the reader feel what this torment would be like, exactly what it would feel like to be stuck... I don't know...

Nice work, though!

[ℰmerald ⚓]

i feel your pain..it really f***s you over...on the bright side it's a good write? :/

[junkiegirl17]

thanks lol.
But it just sucks. I'm so over this place.

[Rob Santana]

S**t I can remember when I was in grade school I was bullied as well. But for me I made each and everyone of those f***s regret ever even laying eyes on me...true story. people still talk about it....I fucken hate bullies with a passion.hang in there sweetie.

[ℰmerald ⚓]

this girl always bullied me last year and then she got a bunch of high schoolers to jump me...I showed them who's boss me ad my sister beat up the high schoolers and then i was so close beating the s**t out of that girl the next day but she called the cops on me and I had to talk this cops..at least I didn't have to go to 3rd-6th period :D