help me..

I'm falling so fast 

suffocating. 

I need help

Im relapsing once more

F**k im dizzy

I need help

someone to save me

someone who cares

i've entered the blue

It wont go away

Help me.

please help me

Reviews

[Daniel Eckert]

Help! I need somebody, Help!

In all seriousness I like this poem a lot. Maybe a struggle with addiction? or serious depression? Either way very well done! thank you for sharing.

[ℰmerald ⚓]

amazing I really like it it's like you put my last feelings in words. great job!:)

[Ees]

Amazing poem.
I particularly like the second stanza! It puts the reader right into the feeling. Wonderful job in making the reader feel the words in there.
Great job!

[Bluefire]

I love it! I have felt this way before and can really relate to the protagonist in this poem. Well done! ^^