South of the Border

For my writing friend,Corey

Down south of the border
in this sweet fishing hole
I go to cast my line
so I bring out my best pole
and bait my hook
with a fresh surprise,
then say " here fishy, fishy
come get this prize!"

No sooner have I
dropped in my line
I get a nibble every time
pulling the line up and out
I see this large fish,
and say " you're mine!"
As it nears dinnertime.

I wear a grin on my face
as I bait my hook
catching fish after fish
while the suns go down
I know that this is my time
down south of the border
this fishing hole of mine!

Reviews

[Crowley]

I wish I had that good of luck, but with the beach, the breeze and the quiet...doesn't really matter now does it. Great write J...felt like I was there.

[Mauricio Montoya]

let me know the next you go south to the border so I can show up for dinner. lol.
Excellent write.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

A woman that loves to fish...now a fella could get used to a gal like that! Great poem!

[Sean M. Addams]

very cool piece ... nice detail in this ... great job on this one ... fishing time for me!

[Poetic Beauty]

I really like this poem and the flow is great. Nothing is better than a whole day of fishing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very snazzy and witty piece... makes me want to go fishing now.