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Denied Access

I opened my heart

only to have it

broken into a million

tiny shards

Didn't he realize

how fragile it

was to me

yet so precious

I tried to put

the pieces of my

shattered heart

back together

instead I let it

grow cold

frozen in time

never to defrost

then you came

into my universe

sharing your own

tragic tales of woe

slowly I let

you in- to help

repair the damage

he left behind

Piece by piece

shard by shard

you helped put the

fragile pieces together

then one day

you had to go

away from me

taking a shard

A small piece

of my heart

to remind you

how precious I am

in time I hope

you'll bring it

back to me

and put it back

where it belongs

If you don't

I will put up

a sign saying:

“Access Denied”

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

i like the emotion in these words. Be strong.. nicely written

[AlexMrrqn]

I can feel your emotion in every word. very good poem. keep on keeping on, and dont shut out every one. sometimes that can do more damage than good.

[Sarah McConnaughey]

That's really sad. :( This is a great poem, though; I can feel the emotion in every word.

[Abigail T]

A broken heart is never easy for anyone. You do a lovely job of conveying that pain, confusion, frustration, etc. So relatable and understandable. Great!

[Omar Fendri]

How's difficult to heal up the eternal wounds ! How much is baleful to live with the fact that you are not okay and you will never be till your missed part comes back !
I like the story in your poem. I cherish the 1st and 2d stanzas ^^
well-done :)