pain

pain

A Poem by Ice QueenJen
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Sometimes people feel pain that can't be seen, yet is very real.

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Pain


I have a pain

somewhere, but nowhere

It's something real, that

I truly can feel

but how to deal

with my pain

I cannot show


to share this feeling

I don't know

trying my best

to get along

while writing

to bid my time

thus gaining some

friends to help along

through my invisible pain

© 2010 Ice QueenJen


Author's Note

Ice QueenJen
This is something more and more people are dealing with- the invisible pain from depression. Whether due to illness or whatever has happened in their lives.

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I can relate so well with this. The majority of my days are spent depressed and pessimistic. I hate that I'm like that, but I can't help it. Great poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was a very good write on the subject...well done...

Posted 14 Years Ago


you seem to be doing better with it than I did in my poem boxes... I guess at least for me it only comes in waves, and now that I recognize that, I can try to ride it out.
Nicely written

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ice QueenJen
Ice QueenJen

Bakersfield, CA



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Not only am I a woman, but a mother, friend, and hopefully the best person I could be. I have begun to broaden my horizons and get into writing poetry. But I also am an artist, and I am trying my ha.. more..

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A Poem by Ice QueenJen