Death

Just something that popped into my head the other night before finally going to sleep!

Death!

The final frontier

nothing more or less

you cease to exist, as

your body decays quickly

and your soul escapes

slowly you stop breathing

soon blood stops flowing

throughout your veins

fleshy moisture has depleted

skin cracking like

a desert land

while in the morgue

quickly the doctor

makes a small slit

in the side of your neck

after he releases

this red liquid

from your dead corpse

soon he prepares

the body for burial

for the final frontier

of your life!

Reviews

[Sarah McConnaughey]

I like it. It has great flow and I like how you worded it. Great job. :)