Gadgets & Gizmo's
A Poem by
Ice QueenJen
A whimsical poem about the endless spending of new things to enhance our lives..... or do they?
Gadgets and Gizmo's
Our lives are filled
with new
gadgets & gizmo's
one claiming to be
better that the previous
what was wrong
with the one before
did it not work
for you
or
has it failed a
process or two
If
it has not
performed
like it should
by
all means chuck it aside
for some shiny
new device
one
that claims to
last & last
But
if its still
in working order
why not be satisfied
with how it works, or
must you always
keep up
with the Jones'?
© 2010 Ice QueenJen
Author's Note
no picture..... sorry!
Featured Review
nice poem and good point....sometimes things are just better as they are....however, keeping up with the jones is not my style. i usually like to drive past them so fast i don't ever have to look at thier ugly faces again....just kiiding....lol....really, a nice poem
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Reviews
"Keep up with the Jones..."
ha ha, loved it.
-joshua
Posted 14 Years Ago
"Keep up with the Jones..."
ha ha, loved it.
-joshua
Good points made :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Good points made :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I love me some gadgets and gizmo's. If you don't want yours...send them to me! Great point, but I am afraid I'm a gadget kinda guy.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I love me some gadgets and gizmo's. If you don't want yours...send them to me! Great point, but I am afraid I'm a gadget kinda guy.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Perfect description of today's society. Something we should all think about with more care.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Perfect description of today's society. Something we should all think about with more care.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Well said! My gizmoes are kept to a minimum...I guess I'm an old fashioned girl!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Well said! My gizmoes are kept to a minimum...I guess I'm an old fashioned girl!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
nice poem and good point....sometimes things are just better as they are....however, keeping up with the jones is not my style. i usually like to drive past them so fast i don't ever have to look at thier ugly faces again....just kiiding....lol....really, a nice poem
Posted 14 Years Ago
nice poem and good point....sometimes things are just better as they are....however, keeping up with the jones is not my style. i usually like to drive past them so fast i don't ever have to look at thier ugly faces again....just kiiding....lol....really, a nice poem
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on July 13, 2010
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Ice QueenJen Bakersfield, CA
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Not only am I a woman, but a mother, friend, and hopefully the best person I could be. I have begun to broaden my horizons and get into writing poetry. But I also am an artist, and I am trying my ha..
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