My Dark Stranger

About a lost love or love lost in the sea of humanity. This was written many years ago, but some could still relate to it.

You came into my life
Unknown to me
With promises and dreams
About day's gone by


You say things that
Make my heart race
Thoughts that you bring up
Make my juices run


Someday will come
When we can join
Two bodies so entwined
We are indistinguishable


When I think about you
I can't seem to sleep
When all my thoughts
Come back to you


There's so much about you
I hoped to know
In time we will see
If things are going to grow


We take our time
So much is at stake
There are people's lives
That we could break


You have certain baggage
That can't be overlooked
Can things change
For better or worse



For now things remain
As they are for us
This is the way it has to be
For it's come this far


Someday maybe it can
Become more, I hope
Or is it not meant to be
I will cherish you anyway


I think about you,
my dark stranger
In everything I do
Your in my heart and soul.




Reviews

[c.m.]

"I think about you,
my dark stranger
In everything I do
Your in my heart and soul."
Oh, now that is so very true. I think everyone can relate to this at one point or another in life, I know I can. Beautiful write here, it evokes some strong emotion. Simply wonderful...very good piece, love.

[Coyote Poetry]

The mind can create desire and hunger. We need to feel excitement and need even if the things may not fall. A very good poem. I lie the feel and the emotion in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[J.Black]

Sigh. I can relate. You're flow is soothing to read, although it's heartbreaking at the same time. "Dark stranger" works perfectly.

[Michael X]

Jeez, such classic romance, your words are a loving escape. I loved it
as well as the clean cut flow, passionate, and delightfully sensuous.

[Ladysue]

Oh, this was so soft and beautiful. I can relate. Nicely done...

[Gheeneil]

The title itself explained isolation of one person from the other. There was a barrier that hindered unity between two people. Dark stranger, for some reason, meant something more than just merely a stranger. Deep. Keep writing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I too can relate... every love starts off with strangers finding a unexplained connection... it's what transpires in that getting to know phase that sets the tone for the future... I agree, beautifully expressed.

[Sean Allen]

I can relate Jan, I think this is beautiful!