pot of gold

just thought I would make something nice, since someone asked for one!

My Pot of Gold

Tis a beautiful day

      a beautiful morning

though the sun's

        Not shining..... I'm happy!

Happy to be alive

        can life get any better?

As my friends surround me,

        my dear friends & family!

Sharing in my bliss, not

       the kind with chocolate

but, kisses of a different kind

       sweet sheltering bliss!

Even though times are rough

        I think about you.....

a smile comes over me

       my already happy face!

Making me feel like....

       dancing on rainbows

hoping to find you at the end

        my sweet pot of gold!

Reviews

[Michael X]

kisses as a sweet blissful shelter, you set the stage for a lively, pure romantic interlude and you have the reader seeing red! as in Valentine's day, i love the candy sweetness your words project and the lively vibe, this was an all around uplifting poem to wonder upon, thanks for shaing your talent :)

[larryb]

Good to see your mood is better nice job :)

[LynLee]

ahhhh this was sweet. as if telling a person, "your the smile to my face."

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Now you know how to really appreciate the finer things in life... cause what is more precious the family love and life... nothing. This poem speaks for me as well.

[Crowley]

Totally upbeat girly...nice poem for a Sunday morning. Do you dance on a rainbow with shoes or without shoes, I have forgotten. When you get to that gold just remember, it tastes better when you share.

[Brokensoul]

Happy to be alive
can life get any better?
As my friends surround me,
my dear friends & family!

loved it for its simplicity!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

First one tonight.. an uplifting poem .. joyful and full of life.
I love all the verses but the one , last one of dancing on rainbows
is my favorite. You don't have to have a pot of gold to be happy.

Chloe