Time to make time

Just a poem I found that I wrote.

 Time to make time
 for me, for you
 I made a vow, and
aim to see it through

Never before attempted, since
the others never lasted
the waiting is long, as
is the road hard & casted

I'm not going away
I'll stick by your side
for better or worse
and thick  n' thin

If it wasn't for someone
we'd be linked already
together......forever, as
a couple insync

I'd hoped by now
I've earned your trust
and my waiting
has been a must

A must to be faithful
to the one I love
and when we finally
shine like a dove!

Reviews

[larryb]

Good stuff....A+

[Orlando Murcia]

Very sweet and promising

Great write

[Crowley]

Beautiful poem J. the writing is great and the sentiment even better. You outdid yourself on this one. nice work poet.