heart times

When you do something to break the bonds of friendship- this is how you would feel.

Heart Times

Have you ever said

something.......... anything

which could be construed

or taken out of context

that hurt another?

To cause the bond

of friendship to be broken

severed.... cuts so deep

into your heart

To cause you shame

brings you grief

so that you feel

like ripping said “heart” out?

Thus feeling no emotions

like you're dead inside

just a shell of a being

walking around- like a zombie!

You go through life

eating, drinking, sleeping

yet..... there is something missing

if only you could turn back

The hands of time

just a second or two

before that fateful moment

all would be right

in your universe!

Reviews

[Bette]

yes i have, i think we all have. well done

[larryb]

So wise and true..well done my friend....

[Not A Writer]

I like how you ask questions to show how you are feeling. That is a great writing technique which I have to use. Good job.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Would it be or would it lead to further disaster down the line... we never know but I know this situation all to well myself... what ifs ar our biggest demons.

[MagiCrystal]

That's such a great poem, every word is real like cut out from real life. It has soul, love, life, places, moments, even the Universe this is magical.. to me !