Feelings are Forever

Whether you stay with the one you love...... the feelings are always there!

You think it's forever, but 
it turns out its not
yet the feelings are there
whether you want them or naught

Oh, how I loved you
though you never came
always so busy, as
you sought your fame

Could I have done more
to make you come to me?
Or run and hide to cry
So you could not see

How my heart aches
from your constant reply,
I so want you, my dear!”
Do I wait and comply?

Oh how I want to
hold you, caress you
now and forever, as
our lives begin

Still you aren't here
with me, to hold me
as my mind wanders
you walk out of view......

Yet, the feelings are there
whether you want them or naught
You think it's forever, but 
it turns out its not.

Reviews

[Journey]

Awe...the seasons of love! It is such a slippery creature...but so desirable! Nice piece Jen (I like saying that because I am Jennifer lol). I also read your about me section and think that you are a very interesting person...*shouting southern greeting*

[MagiCrystal]

One touch.. one kiss, one hug, one love.. and we all are in vision that never ends....endless love.. love it

[Bette]

i love this "Yet, the feelings are there
whether you want them or naught
You think it's forever, but
it turns out its not."

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is an interesting use of "naught"...it fits well though since naught literally means nothing. I think love is forever but most other feelings including desire and hate can fade in time. A good read; I enjoyed this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

True love never dies, the emotions get confusing at times but you never lose them completely... wonderfully expressed.