Cleansing Raindrops

Raindrops are falling

cleansing the earth

the air, and my mind

cleaning the cobwebs

that gathered with dust

to refresh my soul

 

I look up and feel

the drops- drip dropping

onto my face

my eyes, cheeks, and chin

it's cleansing feel

refreshes my body

 

I longed for this....

this cleansing

of my soul and mind

Now to work on the

cleansing of my heart

 

Can the rain do this?

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

Every time I see the rain.. I cry
I feel Gods tears on me.. speaking so loud.. and no one hears
The rain can do much.. yes
It can penetrated the mind. soul and heart
and can kill you too

[Crowley]

wierdly it is raining as I read this....door open, listening to the sounds, smelling the smells. Perfect timing! Nice work, I liked the "drops, drip dropping". Very relaxing subject, very relaxing rhythym.

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Jen, I agree with Dale, the rain is so ever refreshning, and its odors of the ambience resound so nicely, ---mishel

[Michael X]

this has real capturing, hallmark feeling and sentimental wisdom
that leaves the reader with a sense of beautiful overcoming
and hope in progress where the ultimate goal is happiness.
and it is a wonderful feeling, brilliantly done jenn. a pleasure to read
keep up the great work.

[Ladysue]

This was lovely...the feeling of being refreshed and renewed. Beautifully expressed...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That was really wonderful... I believe rain can... to me it is a virtual cleanser of the soul, I know I can watch a rain storm and no mater what is happening in my life I am at peace... your poem masterfully speaks of the power of rain, one of God's greatest gifts to us.