writing or righting?

writing or righting?

A Poem by Ice QueenJen

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Writing or Righting?

 

 

 

I may not place

the commas ( , ) in just

the right place

or use the semi-colon ( ; )

in the proper way!

 

But you have to

give me credit

for writing this to you -

when I want to

ask a question

is this the mark to use- (? )

 

And to make a special point

I surely know

to use

the one that looks

like an upside down - i ( ! )

 

Yet - I'm hoping I get better

as the time goes by

and glean from the

extensive knowledge

& help of those who stand by

 

They take the time

to read our words of wisdom

or share a laugh or two

so may we all have fun

in the writing that we do!

 

 

© 2009 Ice QueenJen


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God bless wholesome creative endeavors by those who enjoy them; no matter what they may be. I paint but I'm a lousy painter..I still enjoy it; it's soothing to me. I do mostly landscapes outdoors in quick drying acrylics since I never had the patience for oils. Nothing wrong with a hobby or enjoying it. It's good for the soul.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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You write with astonishing power.. that leaves me breathless..
what to say.. but.. I love it.. the whole thing

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hell yes....my problem exactly, I consider myself a big picture kinda of guy, sometimes the details slip right by me, even though they are my details. Nice job, I can identify.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Writing should be a pleasure. I appreciate when people are writing and creating. I like the poem. Writing should be a opportunity to learn and create friendship. Poem was a pleasure to read.
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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

God bless wholesome creative endeavors by those who enjoy them; no matter what they may be. I paint but I'm a lousy painter..I still enjoy it; it's soothing to me. I do mostly landscapes outdoors in quick drying acrylics since I never had the patience for oils. Nothing wrong with a hobby or enjoying it. It's good for the soul.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was cute and yes "may we all have fun int the writing that we do"

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 11, 2009

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Ice QueenJen
Ice QueenJen

Bakersfield, CA



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Not only am I a woman, but a mother, friend, and hopefully the best person I could be. I have begun to broaden my horizons and get into writing poetry. But I also am an artist, and I am trying my ha.. more..

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