The Train

The Train

A Poem by Ice QueenJen
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This is what I thought about my recent train ride home.

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 THE TRAIN 

 

Enjoyable

smooth, with ease

riders quietly doing

their time is there own

 

Moving about...... lingering

at the cafe cart

but me- I am in my

own little world

 

Eager to get home

to do what?

reading, writing or

just contemplating

 

 Ah, yet the ride

on the train

was enjoyable

so easy and smooth

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 Ice QueenJen


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I love riding the train, the light rail or the bus. Your time really is your own, unlike driving. I use it to people watch mostly, never that interested in where I am going, sometimes the ride is the best part of my trip.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem really does just go to show that you can write about anything if you really want to.
Haha, oh well, this is a nice light read.
Thumbs up.

< Fear Corrupts! >

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A simple piece but pure joy to read... sometimes those moments of nothing to do can be the most liberating. Welcome back to the cafe.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ice QueenJen
Ice QueenJen

Bakersfield, CA



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Not only am I a woman, but a mother, friend, and hopefully the best person I could be. I have begun to broaden my horizons and get into writing poetry. But I also am an artist, and I am trying my ha.. more..

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