Underwater

What do you see when you are swimming in the ocean? This is a poem about what could be seen.

 

Underwater

Swimming

under the water

I'm free

from the strife

of everyday life

My pain-gone

as I am submerged

into another world

entirely new

Such wondrous sights

with colors so bright

fish of every size

coral, kelp, a hidden ship

long ago taken by a storm

As I am looking around

how could someone

hate this feeling

of being free

while swimming!

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Magnolia]

Love this...I am a swimmer, but not in the ocean. I imagine all this when in the pool. I even write poetry in my head... total freedom I agree...Maggie

[Ice QueenJen]

I love your name, there is a tree not far from my door. I should take a picture of it once it blooms again too. I to write poetry in my head, its just getting it down on paper now!