Sleep

Sleep

A Poem by Ice QueenJen
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I just want to be able to sleep at night,isn't that when we are supposed to close our eyes.

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SLEEP


As darkness falls

I try and sleep

it alludes me still

laying motionless

my thoughts, my worries

from the day off

the wheels keep

turning, churning

my gears grind

as I lay in the

darkness of the night

finally, I sleep

too long again

making my day

drag on, sleepily

I sit feeling

sluggish, lethargic

my brain is in a fog

even though its light.

© 2012 Ice QueenJen


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A beautiful portrayal of what sleep is all about .....
when not being able to sleep ..... and when one
feels sluggish /lethargic after getting from the sleep a vicious circle
created by nature itself leaves us stunned .......... great write said in
selected words with immense flow.......

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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An honest portrayal of the vicious cycle of sleep. Unfortunately, we are creatures of habit. I'm absolutely positive we can look forward to many more sleepless nights. I just had one last night! Thanks for sharing. Keep Writing!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It seems women especially have a hard time turning off the mind to sleep. My wife is no exception. Well, when you can't sleep, write poems like this:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful portrayal of what sleep is all about .....
when not being able to sleep ..... and when one
feels sluggish /lethargic after getting from the sleep a vicious circle
created by nature itself leaves us stunned .......... great write said in
selected words with immense flow.......

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ice QueenJen
Ice QueenJen

Bakersfield, CA



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Not only am I a woman, but a mother, friend, and hopefully the best person I could be. I have begun to broaden my horizons and get into writing poetry. But I also am an artist, and I am trying my ha.. more..

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