Narratives of mental isolation (part 2)

So here is part 2 of the NMI storyline. Our little Emma is struggling more and more with life and seeks closure in writing and creativity. Enjoy! Sincerely yours, Jules.

March crumbles
Writing a thriller isn’t going to happen tonight I’m afraid
Though the thrill isn’t gone
I need to write this of off me
So much sad regrets
As much as those starry skies carry
Make no mistake
There is nowhere to hide from me

In march it all began
Though none is of your concern
Those crumbling walls came crashing down…
and came crashing down they came

Two by one, walk the line
Passing by
Poor old mind
Two by two came to the top
oh and I know the way
oh and I know how it will never stop

And so… Am I uncertain
Am I innocent, Am I love or, Emma

Reviews

[matrixmark]

The second two lines I can really relate to. You summouned it up in 2 lines about how i feel about writing my story from time to time. Stories sometimes own you and you become the slave to them. I really did find myself relating with the fisrt few lines.

You paint the picture that Emma isn't a quitter and I believe she will find a way.

Really well penned, you seem to be a natural at letting words flow and again a pleasure to read.

[ms. barrie]

in writing (or i feel, any creative expression);
one can drown their sorrows, etc. into art as a therapy of self expression.
//
In march it all began
Though none is of your concern
Those crumbling walls came crashing down…
and came crashing down they came

Two by one, walk the line
Passing by
Poor old mind
Two by two came to the top
oh and I know the way
oh and I know how it will never stop

And so… Am I uncertain
Am I innocent, Am I love or, Emma
//

i feel depicts one starting a transition (sorta akin to shedding skin);
and hopefully be able to learn how to cope with all her stresses, by reading her journals... [something like that.]

either way, this is so wonderfully worded...i enjoy the fact that you made the protagonist a fighter, gave her hope...this is another engaging chapter.

i look forward to reading more :) -- thank you for sharing

[ms. barrie]

p.s. apologies if my comment didn't make any sense (too much gaming) -- and i like your choice of font :)

[junXion]

Thank you so much for reading my friend! Be sure to check my profile more often, more parts will be uploaded soon! Sincerely yours, Jules.