young Man

yes

 

There was a young man

Who lived here one day

With you

But time came between us

Uninvited

And gave you

A much different view

Reviews

[kentuck14]

But Dave, a life is like a statue . . . to really appreciate it one needs to walk all around it from different views in order to appreciate it . . . and it takes a while to do so. Okay, so your bronze has tarnished! So What!? Thanks for the poem.
Tom

[john l smith]

So what exactly!!
I feel so much better now, I think!!
Thanks 4 droppin by

[kentuck14]

Glad I could make your day, Dave

[Stella Armour]

oh dear, never mind beauty is in the eye of the beholder ... :)

[john l smith]

that's what I'm afraid of

[Stella Armour]

haha... am sure she has aged with you :)

[Chris Shaw]

That's life for you Dave. One minute you are in your yoof and the next you are fighting off the wrinkles and grey hair. If you do it together though, it ain't all bad :) Good afternoon.

Chris

[john l smith]

i am afraid there is little choice
hope yur havin fun

[Chris Shaw]

Yeah. Lovely weather. Sitting by the harbour in the sun watching the world go by. Glass of red, cheers.

[john l smith]

..........ain't life grand...........

[Chris Shaw]

It is when the sun's out :)

[Samuel Dickens]

Did she notice the aging? It occurs very slowly--hide the pictures.

[john l smith]

cameras and mirrors all removed